Important People Making Important Changes
If I were a very important person, I would help needed people, because I think that people that have the opportunities to help other people they don’t do it. The most important things to do are: reduce violence and invert in education because we need to literate people to improve our level as a country.
Violence is one of the most important things I would change in our country. Violence stops investment in Mexico and make people feel unsure of living in their own cities. Violence is one of the principal factors that affect diplomatic relations with other countries, which means, people don’t trust in Mexico. Also violence limits the growth of our country, mainly economic growth. In addition violence makes that children in our country grow up with fear, that’s why this thing would be one of the things that I change in our country.
In addition, education should be more important in the country. The future of the country is the young people and children. For this reason, it’s very important to invest in education in all grades of education. Mexican education is not sufficient to be competitive with the rest of the world. Consequently, it’s primordial that our country increments the level in education. When Mexico reaches this goal, Mexico will develop considerably.
In other hand, the corruption is another big problem that we have to change in our country. This problem has been increased with the past of the time; we have to stop and try to be more carefully with this kind of acts. If we know that somebody is doing an act of corruption we have to denunciate. Maybe in the future we can see a Nation more just and sovereign.
As a conclusion, I would like help needed people, give them the opportunity to improve her life’s quality. I believe that the future of this country and the world is in the next generations and to make this country one of the most beautiful and peaceful for his habitants.
Hi Orange Team!
ResponderEliminarI really like your point of view about this theme, I think that is really important understand themes like this. Actually we started writing our essay about this theme but we changed our minds. In fact write examples in essay is very usefull for create an environment more complete and more understanding.
GREAT JOB!!!!!
Carlos Arellano
Hi, orange team..!
ResponderEliminarI agree with your idea about Mexico and their problems, because I always have thought that our country has a lot of things which could make it one of the most important and powerful country in the world, like beautiful landscapes, talented people, etc. However, as you say we need more and better education in order to change our minds and have success in everything that we do.
Chantell Cano Cruz
Hello orange team:
ResponderEliminarI think your essay has two points which have made that Mexico doesn’t improve in many aspects because seems that we still thinking as slaves not as an enterprising and successful country. I think this way to think and to act is because of our poor education and the violence that has made Mexico a dangerous and discriminated country. As you say our generation can be de difference.
Ileana Hdz. Pimentel
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ResponderEliminarHi!
ResponderEliminarI am in total agree with you, mainly about the investment in the education because I think that the violence and corruption consequence of the bad education that exist in our country. There are many things that we can do for our contry, but almost everythimg is around of the education. All people can be succesful in their lifes only if they received a good education and if we are succesful we certainly can help the economic, political and social development of our contry and in this way to avoid violence, corruption and many other defects which we live today.
Karina Corona
Hello Orange Team!!!
ResponderEliminarI agree with your essay, Mexico must fight against those two problems. But we must have consciousness of our acts.
Mexico would be a safe country, if all the people do the correct things, if the education is good and if our governors make their work.
Xóchitl Rodríguez Villegas