Error Correction. - Correct the three errors in punctuating adjective clauses.
While working at my first job, which was at a clothing store, I had a co-worker who got me into a lot of trouble. She had stolen some money from the cash register and then blamed me. I insisted on my innocence, but my supervisor, who did not believe me fired me that day.
Ten years later, I got an e-mail_that stunned me. It was from the woman who had gotten me fired. She was writing to tell me how sorry she was for what she had done! I now realize that the experience that cost me my job also taught me a valuable lesson. Sometimes people hurt themselves when they cheat or lie more than the people they lie to or about. This incident, which I had almost forgotten still troubled my former co-worker, even after all these years.
Step 1. Prewriting. Using information questions to generate ideas. Think about an incident in your life that taught you a lesson. Then write questions about the incident to help generate ideas.
Example: Who was involved?
WHO cheated you?
WHAT did she say?
WHEN she cheated you?
WHERE were you when she cheated you?
WHY she did it?
HOW did the situation?
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